"but it finally was learning to recognize light, instead of finding a place to drown."
👌 line. Heartening. So glad, this story ended with this and the following line. Cause i was getting depressed reading Leher go on and on. I am idiot. Idoit. Loser.. why was i born. Why am I Alive. Like daily mantra.
I left wondering if she was suicidal.
The part I loved most, beautifully written, was how she and her brother patch up. Too adorable .. 🥰. Just like among sibblings.
My hopes. In your next Post. Your protagonist won't be this self-loathing.
Thank you so much for such an honest read and for this comment. The repitition, I agree, was too much and not standard for literary pieces. But it was sort of intentional, to show the loop of thoughts one gets stuck into. I'll try to work around it in a different way next time. Even I felt it was too depressing of a read.
Thank you so much for reading this. I'm really grateful for the feedback. You're really so kind. Thank youuuu sooo much.
Thank you tooo. For replying. I was concerned about you. I shall DM and speak to you one of these days, that is, when me my mind is bit free. Well, I managed to win over my relectance and posted a post. Hope you recieved. I remember you asking me, what happened you haven't posted any new post. Which was so cute of you to ask.
I'm sorry , I hadn't checked your post yet. I'll check it out soon. Currently in the village for the Holi. But that's really amazing that you are posting again now. ✨
And yes, the idea of the story was just that. That sometimes it's okay to just stay afloat and not worry about going in a direction. You got it right. Thank you so much. I'm grateful 🙂↕️✨
"but it finally was learning to recognize light, instead of finding a place to drown."
👌 line. Heartening. So glad, this story ended with this and the following line. Cause i was getting depressed reading Leher go on and on. I am idiot. Idoit. Loser.. why was i born. Why am I Alive. Like daily mantra.
I left wondering if she was suicidal.
The part I loved most, beautifully written, was how she and her brother patch up. Too adorable .. 🥰. Just like among sibblings.
My hopes. In your next Post. Your protagonist won't be this self-loathing.
Also, this is not a auto fictional piece.
Thank you so much for such an honest read and for this comment. The repitition, I agree, was too much and not standard for literary pieces. But it was sort of intentional, to show the loop of thoughts one gets stuck into. I'll try to work around it in a different way next time. Even I felt it was too depressing of a read.
Thank you so much for reading this. I'm really grateful for the feedback. You're really so kind. Thank youuuu sooo much.
Thank you tooo. For replying. I was concerned about you. I shall DM and speak to you one of these days, that is, when me my mind is bit free. Well, I managed to win over my relectance and posted a post. Hope you recieved. I remember you asking me, what happened you haven't posted any new post. Which was so cute of you to ask.
Yeah yeah sure.
I'm sorry , I hadn't checked your post yet. I'll check it out soon. Currently in the village for the Holi. But that's really amazing that you are posting again now. ✨
No problem. Have A Great Happy Holi-day with family, relatives, friends at your native place. 😇👍
Thank youuu. Wishing you happy holi-day too (you really made it such an interesting word 😁) ❤️
😄. Happy to read you reply.
What a lovely writeup...I am in need of such articles nowadays 😊...Keep writing ✍️
Thank you so much for reading, and your time yar🥹🫂❤️
It means a lot 🙂↕️ I'm truly grateful 🙏🏻✨
Thank you so much for reading 🙏🏻
And yes, the idea of the story was just that. That sometimes it's okay to just stay afloat and not worry about going in a direction. You got it right. Thank you so much. I'm grateful 🙂↕️✨