I am glad you did add the poem, it made the story a lot more richer, given that if you see you picked such a simple plot of a train journey, but you made it work brilliantly.
Keep writing more of these nice stories I guess!!
Really loved the quality you are putting here on substack with these well put short stories
Here's the another poem related to this one only. Actually, I wrote them both together last year. This one would have fitted better but this one was also about trains, so it would have been bit weird in the story. That's why I didn't add this one.
But thank you so much for your time, honestly. Getting to know how people like something you wrote is pure bliss. :)))
This was such a fun read, i really loved how this piece started describing the megh that is the clouds and then you could sort of resemble that same character within megh, our guy throughout the story, all in all really loved the story, especially the poem too, this was such a quality read!!
Thank youuu sooo much Shaan, it really means a lot to me. I am really grateful.
I didn't mean to add the poem initially, but it hit me that I had written two of those poems together last year, so I added it. Didn't expect anyone to pay much attention to it XD . But thank you so much for reading that too. I am really glad you liked it. And if you have any other feedback let me know about that too. Thank you so so much for your time :)))
Loved it ♥️♥️♥️
Thank you so so much!! Means a lott really <333
I am glad you did add the poem, it made the story a lot more richer, given that if you see you picked such a simple plot of a train journey, but you made it work brilliantly.
Keep writing more of these nice stories I guess!!
Really loved the quality you are putting here on substack with these well put short stories
Thank you so so much for this :))))
It matters a lot to me.
https://substack.com/@amelioratinga/note/c-121626762
Here's the another poem related to this one only. Actually, I wrote them both together last year. This one would have fitted better but this one was also about trains, so it would have been bit weird in the story. That's why I didn't add this one.
But thank you so much for your time, honestly. Getting to know how people like something you wrote is pure bliss. :)))
This was such a fun read, i really loved how this piece started describing the megh that is the clouds and then you could sort of resemble that same character within megh, our guy throughout the story, all in all really loved the story, especially the poem too, this was such a quality read!!
Thank youuu sooo much Shaan, it really means a lot to me. I am really grateful.
I didn't mean to add the poem initially, but it hit me that I had written two of those poems together last year, so I added it. Didn't expect anyone to pay much attention to it XD . But thank you so much for reading that too. I am really glad you liked it. And if you have any other feedback let me know about that too. Thank you so so much for your time :)))
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Thank youuu <33
This was a good read.
Thank you so muchhh.. Glad you liked it :)))
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Thank youuu soo muchh <33 <33